25-10-10(17:31:24)

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I am
a bundle of hormones
a constant state of infection
a splatter on someone’s forgotten highway
a high-pitched whine, ubiquitous
a pathetic excuse for a human being
a feckless example of girlhood
spliced with bitterness of old age
and pain of someone much less privileged
what right have i to feel that
when blessings abound?
how wretchedly American

All Comments

  • hahahahha thumbs up! How do you come up with these 😛

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:39 pm Reply
  • Thank you…I simply write what I think

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:43 pm Reply
  • i like 😉 hehehe so you where the one who wrote the big one ya??

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:44 pm Reply
  • Yeah…that was me

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:47 pm Reply
  • Great one!! and btw great place to post your poems 😉

    Cheers from Lebanon 🙂

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:51 pm Reply
  • Thank you very much 🙂
    Maybe I’ll come to Lebanon someday

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:55 pm Reply
  • Thank you very much 🙂
    All my confessions seem to come in poetry form, so maybe I’ll keep writing

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 9:56 pm Reply
  • ya please do, if you do come to Lebanon do let me know :P, write to me on simplyconfess, and ill catch you!

    PS: KEEP writing! haha… i am sure you have your peers who like confessing, let them know of simplyconfess! i am friends with the owners!

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 10:09 pm Reply
  • Okay. I’ll do that 🙂

    Anonymous October 25, 2010 11:53 pm Reply
  • Then I don’t like your thinking… Seriously, cheer up.

    T.A.

    Anonymous October 26, 2010 4:08 am Reply
  • Confession isn’t exactly cheery…it’s the expression of faults, so maybe ‘cheer up’ isn’t the most constructive thing you could have said…

    Anonymous October 26, 2010 7:23 am Reply
  • I should have advised her to go to church?

    T.A.

    Anonymous October 26, 2010 8:09 am Reply
  • Maybe instead you should just approach the situation as it is: a girl letting something off her chest, looking to confess without being told that her confession is too dark… If all the confessions on here were bright and cheery, they wouldn’t be confessions. Submitting the dark parts of yourself only to be told to ‘cheer up’ isn’t really what the site was created for, I don’t think…

    Anonymous October 26, 2010 8:07 pm Reply

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