your writing s****. You don’t use punctuation correctly and the way you format dialogue is not only confusing, but wrong. Your characters are all the same people used over again and you have no idea how to properly pace a story or realistically convey human emotion. All of the main characters are beautiful but haunted by sorrow, and there is no heart to the story. Every single one is a shallow means to a shallow end- a stupid, dopey romance which will always go the same way.

I hate your writing. But if I try to give you constrictive criticism in a positive way you take it personally, so I just lie and tell you it’s good.