writing for ads and drama

i made a student chocolate commercial at channel 9 video production at brisbane Mt Cootha studios and i wrote the commerical and then we filmed it.
the chocolate bar was called “TOO MUCH” like the spice girls song…

the ad was set around a auction bid for the chocolate bar and a lady and her secretary were bidding for the item against another dude we called James Bond … anyway they kept bidding against each other bids got high then the secretary turned to the lady and said “its too much” and she said “but one bite of Too Much is never enough…” or something.
i wrote another story about PANTALONI for Drama class he was with a character my mums dad made up and he left his coat on a branch of a tree and the whole time he was talking to the coat and PANTALONI had disappeared to chase the sprite.
I wrote several ghost stories for school as well…
but I was never really good at stories and wanted to be better writer creator… thinker, artist and innovator …
catherine1moloaa birkdale

–i wrote a short ghost story at school my teacher really liked once. it was about a ghost of who was carrying a lantan light and in the distance the light and voice got louder and the ghost was running down a hill from a haunted house. I can’t remember most of it now but i wrote it in grade 8 or 9, I think. i got the idea from my sister one night running from the old house on the hill my grandparents had in 1970s before it burnt down.
i would write ghost dreams i was having often and started to enjoy that genre. but then gave up for a while and went back to school later.
catherine 1moloaa
more of my dream…
the spirit lights that came over the sky were flying dragons and they danced around outside in the night. I seen blood dripping down the window panes and a loud screech as one of the demon dragon spirits exploded. others ran across the roof tops and slid into cracks in the roof. a dazzling light display of more drones and dragon spirits were coming from afar over the water, or were they search lights?
I wanted to stretch but was so scared to move.
I panicked fear of fire but then as I was half asleep and half awake the dragon light spirits flew into my room and they came into my body and it was either a make or break situation they said “let me in or you will die” so I opened my body and exposed my neck and opened my mouth just enough for them to enter into me.
the dragon spirits danced around the room and came into me as a host. I was given eternal life … I knew they had done this long ago with my mother and father as well.
they were dragon spirits. and that gave them eternal life. you must suffer the slow burn death for the eternal life dragon spirits who fly from afar hidden places.
laying next to an old body I was worried that at some point the dragon would come into shape and my mother and fathers body would disappear and her dragon form would take over with wings and tail and large teeth. would I have to kill them to live. was it consume or be consumed? would these dragons eat me??
then I woke up.
this is one i had from a dream…last year
catherine1moloaa birkdale